Self Edit Good vs Evil Paper

Here is the presentation if you are not done in class:

Self Edit Presentation

Please make your changes and bring another clean copy to class on Wed/Thurs depending on when you see me next.

Parent Permission Slip

Parent Permission for Paper


This needs to be in by Friday, April 8!

Homework 4/4

Paragraph on whose fault Bruno's death is due tomorrow.  Write it on a piece of loose leaf neatly or type!

1. Green Claim/Thesis
2. List of Yellow Reasons/Proofs
3. 1st Yellow Reason/Proof
4. 1st Red Evidence/Details
5. 1st Red Evidence/Details
6. 1st Counter Claim
7. 2nd Yellow Reason/Proof
8. 2nd Red Evidence/Details
9. 2nd Red Evidence/Details
10. 2nd Counter Claim
11. Green Conclusion - Restate Thesis/Claim and Reasons/Proofs

Gretel is most at fault for Bruno’s tragic death. Gretel is responsible because she knew about the concentration camps and she made Bruno believe that the camp was good. Gretel knew the true nature of the camp, but didn’t tell Bruno, and so Bruno didn’t know what he was getting in to. Gretel is older and wiser than Bruno. Gretel knew it wasn’t a farm, but a camp. Gretel knew what Lt. Kotler did to Pavel, but she didn’t explain it to Bruno. Although some believe it is the parent's responsibility to tell these things,Gretel should have told him.Gretel made Bruno believe that the Nazis and the camp were good, so Bruno was not afraid of the camp. Gretel assured Bruno that what Father was doing in the camp was good. Gretel was always flirting with Lt. Kotler, and listened to what he said about the camp.Although Gretel didn’t feel she needed to explain, she should have spelled out what was happening in the camp. Gretel knew the evil nature of the camp but didn’t tell Bruno the truth,therefore, confusing him about the true nature of the Jews. Gretel kept Bruno from the knowledge of good and evil, which put him in a dangerous situation, causing his death.